hi people! hi melissa, this is my work and I hope you like it! =)
well, now I am going to talk about a charity event! this summer when I went to Asturias, to the beach, I saw a group of seven or eight childrens doing brazalets, pictures and sandwichs! my friends and I bought some brazalets (I think they were beautiful) and we bought some sandwichs too, the boys were very happy! these childrens told me that the money their raise goes to the church every Sunday! we saw them every night near the beach, smiling and with their hearts of gold! maybe we see them this year again!
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Hi Marta! I can see your work now. Maybe you might want to change the "plantilla" of your blog so that all your work is easier to read. Just go to "personalizar" and you can change it to a different one.
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hi people! hi melissa, this is my work and I hope you like it! =)
Well, now I am going to talk about a charity event! This summer when I went to Asturias, to the beach, I saw a group of seven or eight children(s) (doing)MAKING braCElets, AND SELLING pictures and sandwichEs! My friends and I bought some braCElets (I think they were beautiful) and we bought some sandwichs too, the boys were very happy! These childrens told me that the money (their)THEY raise goes to the church every Sunday! We saw them every night near the beach, smiling and with their hearts of gold! Maybe we WILL see them this year again!
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